Question: How does this storyline for a movie sound?
The ghost of the Duchess of Kent communicates with 3 present day girls in America, and tells them a secret that though in history class, you learn that the Duchess of Kent committed suicide when her husband was behedded, however, she was killed by the Prince of England for knowing that he impreginated Marie Antoinette. Thus, Marie Antoinette's child was english. In order to erase any suspicion that he was in an affiar with Marie Antoinette, he planned her execution with the revolutionaries.
Answer: It's got potential, just organize your thoughts a little better, it reads a little confusing.
Louis XVI & Marie-Antoinette - Apologize